Dirty Trick

Dirty Trick

Posted by: Greg Keeler / added: 09.21.2010 / Back to Tailgate

Dirty Trick

 

Those trout, swimming

for days, maybe weeks,

with my flies in their mouths,

they’re the ones that got away

with a style of piercing that’s come

more and more into vogue.

When I catch them

wearing the flies of others,

I am tempted to make

simple comparisons,

but punk just doesn’t do it,

nor does shrapnel,

though I lean toward the latter.

Matching the hatch is a dirty trick,

no matter how you play it,

and for the purist,

the dirtier the better.

Without a barb,

the hook goes deeper.

 

I don’t mean to think these thoughts,

but once thought, they stick,

and I carry them around in my mouth

for days, maybe weeks,

before I spit them out

and keep on fishing.




Comments:

Posted by Bob MacNeal on Sep 22nd, 2010 @ 10:25 am

I enjoyed this one

When I, a city dweller beholden to a city-centric job, daydream about untamed rivers in the mountain west, I think of photo-realistic trout gracefully navigating lazy pools of pristine water. And, I imagine that these trout have no back-story.

I enjoy how your poem cheapens my reverie, like the disappointment of spotting a discarded flip-top box of Marlboros on the shoreline. Your poem reminds me that nothing comes into our lives without a back-story (e.g., "wearing the flies of others").

I also enjoy how you turn that back-story into pesky thoughts that aren't easily shed.



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