The World Smells like Honey

The World Smells like Honey

Posted by: JG / added: 04.21.2011 / Back to Tailgate
Evening Hatch

I wear my trouser cuffs rolled up, their bottoms wet with river water
because it is nearing dusk and I’ve snuck away.
My silk tie is about to fall from my pocket and wrap around the branches
of a downed tree. I’m not going to notice, and I won’t miss it
as it shreds in the current over months like a windsock.
And yes my shoes, submerged, will smell all year of mud.

But here I am anyway, casting at dusk, while off in the distance the clink
of glasses as the bride and groom move between tables.
Here, the wandering edge of riffle, so close, and the towering cottonwoods,
so close, and the boulders breaking current and the current exposing boulders
in the wash of white water I can only see out of the corner of my eye.

I drift back to the big white tent, emerging at the father daughter dance.
And although I ditched my fly rod at the spruce
the world is noticeably different and the world notices it is different
as I walk in wet shoes across the room, as if I were tracking flour
from a broken pantry door. Someone slaps me on the back.
My cuffs, unrolled now. The world tastes like honey.

-- Cameron Scott





Comments:

Posted by matt josephson on May 9th, 2011 @ 6:47 am

Fish head

Breaking away from normal life is a must and is standered for fishers. Even for a couple of drifts at a wedding. I can see those cottonwood and smell that mud. I also see the beautiful bride. thanks Cam!
Posted by piper foster on Apr 21st, 2011 @ 8:45 pm

surrendered tie shredded like a windsock

Cam, as always the poem exceeds expectations for where the poet's voice will take me, naive reader. I am reminded of all those moments I want to sneak away from the pomp, but never have been brave enough to.

the soggy shoes, the freedom!
Posted by Helga Kidder on Apr 22nd, 2011 @ 8:39 am

Evening Hatch

A beautifully worded, visually tactile poem.
Posted by Jeremi Kentz on Apr 22nd, 2011 @ 10:44 am

Word

Nice work! I love the line about the world noticing it's different!! Yummy!!
Posted by Damon on Apr 23rd, 2011 @ 6:30 am

good read

Nicely muted poem. Imagery is out in the world, but the tone is quietly introspective. Really enjoy that image of "tracking flour / from a broken pantry door."
Posted by Alan on Apr 23rd, 2011 @ 11:51 am

Yeah.

This has such great atmosphere. Shoes smelling like mud for a year... yes.
Posted by Katey Schultz on Apr 23rd, 2011 @ 7:47 pm

Thank you

Dear Fly Fish Journal,

Thanks for helping us "non-fishers" out there catch a glimpse of what it's all about through poems such as this. Cam Scott's work is accessible, vivid, and rings true even for those who've never touched a fly rod.

~Katey Schultz, editor TRACHODON Magazine
Posted by Scott C on Apr 24th, 2011 @ 6:14 am

Nice One Cam!

Oh the many ways the world is different now. It's great to see more of your work. Keep the muse alive!
Posted by Dawn on Apr 25th, 2011 @ 6:23 am

"the world notices it is different"

gorgeous. I'm happy to have read this.



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